See the Stuff Behind You*

Oh universe, keep on raining.
 
I think the first one because
it is outside and it looks cool
like the sky is dark
 
blurry trees rain lots of
rain. Trees swaying in the
nice warm breeze.
Hard to see past the slow
swaying trees. Dark clouds
in the dark night.
 
I noticed that there
was sun and the sidewalk
was dry and it started to
rain and the sidewalk
had a puddle and you
could tell there is a
puddle because you can
see a reflection of the trees.
 
rock hitting the water. See
the stuff behind you.

*4th graders at Buffalo's Discovery School responding to art in a group poem

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